Thursday, May 16, 2013

Alien Descriptions

We have been describing aliens using adjectives and similes. Charlene and Avantika then recorded themselves reading their description. Can you work out which alien Charlene and Avantika are describing?

Alien Description from cee one on Vimeo.

11 comments:

  1. Avantika and Charlene you are super!

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  2. Hello and Avantika and Charlene, it's Miss Lepou here. I can tell from those descriptions that you are still excellent writers. You described the aliens very well and used some great adjectives. Keep up the great work.

    Miss Lepou

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  3. Good job Avantika and charlene.

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  4. I like the way you how you make very good choice to pick aliens for the class . I like the way you picked the photo and did the whole class write a story?

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  5. Hi guys I really like the way that you made up that alien thing I found it fun cool and interesting about all those aliens but next time you just might what use a clear voice and by the way I loved what you guys were learning about.Anyway did you guys do that all together?

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  6. I like how you guys read it.

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  7. WOW! brilliant! Avantika and charlene. I loved it. Great work.

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  8. your story was awsome.

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  9. I knew which alien it was all the time

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  10. Avantika & Charlene wonderful reading super!

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